Tuesday, February 06, 2007

A Poet!

Dearest Shruti,

Since my two word message failed to impress you, I have written something more elaborate. So here goes:

An Ode to a Facebook Picture:

"Ravishing beauty!",
He exclaimed.
Just gorgeous!

He looked, again,
With wonder.
Online, she was
Lovely and enchanting.

Kettle-like whistle, escaped.
Her hands, intricately decorated.
Red and brown.
What perfection!

Breaking out of his trance,
For work had to be done. He
Grudgingly logged out,
Switched windows and frowned.

"Only if she
Were here", he thought.
Poems don't do her justice.
But this will have to do.

Thank you,

Yours sincerely,

P.J.X. Poem

The Maggi (tm) of Poetry.
Crafting 2 minute poems since 2006.


Nothings aplenty said...

:) two minute poem? nice.

Escape.... Great Escape said...

I would have written

Only if she were
Here... I Thought

But then it wasn't me who wrote this. Wasn't it ?

Siddharth Adelkar said...

thank you amit. thank you so much. i am flattered.